The wind billows down the shore
And past where I am standing.
It took ages and ages for us
To come to an understanding.
He lies dead at my feet
His golden crown now mine.
His throne, his queen are no more his
And his city I shall refine.
They shall build monuments
To mark their king’s defeat.
They shall sculpt their ruler
Lying dead at my feet.
My eyes brim with pride
On beholding this city vast.
All that I had wished for
Is mine, at last.
All injustice, all the pain –
He has now paid for.
That throne which was rightly mine –
I couldn’t even touch it before.
I was left out, abandoned
While he got my throne – my everything.
I was betrayed, I was exiled
By my very kin.
For it is he, my brother
Who lies dead at my feet.
I avenged my right
And he tasted defeat.
I got what I wanted
But was I in the right?
What was it for which I sacrificed
My everything in this fight?
I tasted victory, yet
Was it not futile?
I gave up all desires
I have forgotten how to smile.
I shall gain fame
There will be a myth
About my winning the throne and the crown
But no one to share it with.
My family has left me
I am all alone.
Now that I know what I have done,
My brother I shall bemoan.
I had been blinded by ambition
Everything else seemed a waste;
Now I know what it is
To feel victory’s taste
Woahhh❤️
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Thanks😊
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I loved this poem. You paint a really beautiful image.
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Thanks a lot.
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You’re welcome. I hope you’ll consider the short writing competition on my site. https://wendyallott.com/2017/03/01/march-writing-competition/?iframe=true&theme_preview=true
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I will surely check it out but I am not sure if I will be able to participate.
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No worries 🙂
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Nice writing!
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Thanks😀.
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Depiction of the aftermath of victory , yes nice your poem reminds me of a Christian song “it is so fun to see , so fun to see Satan lose ” 😊 … Great diction and ideas …. God is victory so when I see victory it reminds me of him …. You know when you conquered your senses are heightened uncontrollabely
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Thank you for commenting😁. I will listen to the song you mentioned.
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You welcome , song by Ron konelly-Jesus is a winner man
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Superbly written. Thank you for following BrewNSpew.
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Thanks for commenting😀.
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What a lovely poem, Vishwambhari! Is this just a random thought or is it inspired from history. I ask as some of it reminds me of Asoka. Loved it, enjoyed it.
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Thank you! It just came to me while we were reading one of Shakespeare’s sonnets and I wrote it down, though I don’t claim any prowess in this field.
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You are paving the way to be one, my dear! I liked, double liked and loved it! So glad to have stumbled into your space 🙂
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Thanks again😁.
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Well ✒ penned👍👍👍👌
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Thank you😊
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